Bowling Interview

This essay was a lot different than the pervious one. In this essay there was not a lot of descriptive details of the surrounding or people. However, this essay was still full of interesting facts. The first paragraph was full of interesting facts about bowling; from fun facts like that bowling is the most widely played sport (I did not even know bowling was considered a sport!) to the history of bowling. I thought it was really sweet that mothers and their children played together. The author obtained good information from the people she was interviewing, like how old they were when they started bowling and how long they have been doing it. even though there was not too much descriptive detail, I still felt like I was there. For example, I got the vibe of how the people were just from how they answered question and talked. The subtitles were helpful becasue I could already have an idea about what was in that section before I read it. It also helped break the paper up. However, the conclusion seemed to be glued onto the last paragraph and did not really fit. I think a longer conclusion in a seperate paragraph would have been a better choice. Other than that, I thought that the essay was pretty good!